Hello,My name is Tom,This is my best friend Bob,He is a handsome boy,And he very like laugh ,If you gave he a funny story,He will to"ha ha ha",Then you can look him,Wow,He look like a manky.Play chess is his hobby,And of course he play chess is really good,If you want to play chess with him,I can assure you certain lost.so nice to meet you my best friend.

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       Hello,My name is Tom.This is my best friend Bob. He is a handsome boy, and he likes laugh very much. If you tell him a funny story, he will always laugh. Then you will find that he looks like a monkey.Playing chess is his hobby, And of course he plays chess very well. If you want to play chess with him, I assure you that you will certainly lose. Can you tell me something about your friend?

    初一:三下五除二

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你好，我叫汤姆。这个是我最好的朋友鲍勃。他是一个英俊的男孩，他非常喜欢笑。如果你给他讲一个有趣的故事，他总是会笑的。然后你会发现他看起来像个猴子。玩下棋是他的爱好，他下棋当然很好。如果你想和他下棋，我向你保证你一定会输的。你能告诉我一些关于你朋友的事吗？